Today, I edited the work of a brilliant, highly accomplished female executive. Here’s the tip I shared with her: The point of your sentence should come last for emphasis. In following this advice and reworking her sentences, the revisions resulted in an astounding difference in her writing!
Also, once again I am reminded of the importance of knowing one’s purpose, understanding the audience, and searching for precise words to drive home a message.
JS 🙂
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